The Third Writers' Study Occasional Competition: Poetry-Night
Poets three braved the dangers of lyrical writing and were all found worthy. The voters loved each and one of them yet in the end only one can take the top spot. A dark and grim tale the winner's poem tells - a tale that awakens emotion in the most stoic of men. Congratulations ggggtotalwarrior on your well-deserved win. For his win ggggtotalwarrior receives one competition point bringing his total to two.
Here's ggggtotalwarrior winning poem:
Thank you to everyone who entered and everyone who voted in our Third Occasional Competition.
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Re: The Third Writers' Study Occasional Competition - The Winner!
This was a really good poem Geggy. I am not one for poetry myself, but I definitely liked the idea, the execution, and the general mood of it all.
If I were to give one little critique, the bit at the end where they are actual aliens seemed weird to me. The alien imagery at the beginning worked really well, and set an eerie and super creepy tone to it all, but for some reasons having the experimenters be actual aliens just seemed weird to me. But that's just me. You may take the point or leave it. Either way, a darn fine poem!
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