I had to write a short story for my Sci-Fi english class. Its five and a half pages long its untitled and I was hoping that you guys after reading it could give me some suggestions along with some constructive criticism. Also note that I live in Canada and many of my words will have the ENGLISH spelling (i.e. the proper way of spelling it) rather then the american spelling. Thanks a bunch in advance to anyone that reads it and replies. :grin